Caine @ Pap-West

   Who’s The Hero In Your Family? WALT:  I elaborate on my ideas with relevant details  e.g. each idea has supporting detail I can use the 4 E’s in my writing- Evidence, Explanation, Example, Elaboration To create a picture in the reader’s head My grandma is my hero because she will always bake me cookies and she will always be there for me when she is sick or when she is bizzy. She is always kind to me because she will always let me stay at her house when I am not allowed and she will give me cookies and not the other people.  She will always be tired but she always has to go to work when she is tired and she is never getting any sleep because she will always stay up late for my cousin baby and  cousin baby will always cry so that is why she will always stay up My grandma will always take me out to nice places like a restaurant and buy me a phone and shoes but I always feel sorry for my grandma because she always has to pay my uncle.  

  Dear: Carla   Last seat last row. Mrs Eble class red hill school room 14. I am sorry for not coming to help you pack up and clean.  I went to the birthday party and  I got the most points for the game and I won a harmonica. I gave Colleen a gift from my heart and all of the girls were like I wish I had one of those. I saw your letter that you left for me on your desk.  When the birthday party ended she opened my letter and I actsadently wrote love Bradley and they shouted Bradley has a crush on Colleen and then Karen stuck up for me. I and Jeff are friends again and we walked back together. When you handed in my book report you said you actsadently ripped it when I ripped it and I got a gold star for my book report. And this time I did not sit on the cake this time. I will not rip my book report again. Poor Jeff got a doll's dress and he was still happy about it and he did not complain.  I meet a dog called chicken and he always follows me wherever I...