Superhero in your family Caine.

  Who’s The Hero In Your Family?


WALT: 

  • I elaborate on my ideas with relevant details  e.g. each idea has supporting detail

  • I can use the 4 E’s in my writing- Evidence, Explanation, Example, Elaboration

  • To create a picture in the reader’s head


My grandma is my hero because she will always bake me cookies and she will always be there for me when she is sick or when she is bizzy.


She is always kind to me because she will always let me stay at her house when I am not allowed and she will give me cookies and not the other people. 



She will always be tired but she always has to go to work when she is tired and she is never getting any sleep because she will always stay up late for my cousin baby and  cousin baby will always cry so that is why she will always stay up




My grandma will always take me out to nice places like a restaurant and buy me a phone and shoes but I always feel sorry for my grandma because she always has to pay my uncle.










 

Comments

  1. Philiprip11 April 2021 at 01:26

    Good work, Caine. You are beginning to organise your work into paragraphs. I like the way you have used the 4 E's to add detail to your ideas.

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